Soldiers

While everyone else runs away from the conflict. Who will stand and fight? When no one else can save innocent lives. These people run in to save them. The British would not give us freedom. But they fought and are still fighting for freedom, volunteering to risk their lives each and every day. Their families may not see them for an extended period of time or they may never see them again!! Soldiers, Soldiers, Soldiers!!!!!!! Soldiers are one of the bravest people on Earth.
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2 comments:

  1. KaitlinMay 7, 2010 at 9:03 AM

    You really need to go back over, and check grammer.

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  2. Alyssa VMay 7, 2010 at 9:04 AM

    You need to edit because you missed words and there is grammer that takes away from what you are trying to say.

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